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Nov. 6th, 2004

From my mental list of Stories Planned, my first ever fic featuring sexual matters could have been one of the following three: underage girl/scary older male handler; Mireille/futanari Kirika; weird chimaerical lupine-feline critter/human girl.

It wound up the latter.

Fear me, for my first three adult fics are destined to be HET. I think I'm coming down with something.

Hey, you should have seen the fic a certain other someone wrote in this universe... at least this is consensual. :3 Some violence, I suppose technically bestiality (not together), and my usual prediliction for underage-lookin' chicks. Mostly posted because raistlyne will read it, and in case anyone else incidentally wants to. Also mostly a vent-mixed-with-fantasy; no specific reason for writing it, I had the fight scene in my head and wanted to draw it but couldn't, and it grew from there.

Part of my virus-transformation Universe With No Name, which has four stories to date! Whee!

Pack Dominance - het, non-anthro animal/human, NC-17

Also, sorry for the lack of line breaks; you'll have to open it in Notepad or some text thingy, because IE don't word-wrap. ;_;

Comments

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raistlyne
Nov. 6th, 2004 11:38 am (UTC)
Mrfle! Yes, of course I will read it... and despite being a het fic I think it is fairly yummy. And I think we've both been increasingly interested in writing depraved fics. I feel that I should write another story in this universe, perhaps less non-consensual... Eep! I have an idea...

Yes, there is something terribly wrong with our minds :3 I'm very pleased with this turn of events.

Additionally, I really like the description of their appearance. I got a really vivid mental image of these guys. I love it!
mousse9
Nov. 6th, 2004 12:08 pm (UTC)
It's kind of a Fallout style universe isn't it? Mad Max too, except not as poor. And I like Big Bad Wolves and Little Red Riding Hoods. =P

.....Nevermind.

And.....shame on you! Writing HET fics! =P
eclective
Nov. 6th, 2004 12:29 pm (UTC)
Mousse, you actually READ this? I'm shocked. XD
mousse9
Nov. 6th, 2004 01:20 pm (UTC)
You know not the depths of my depravity. =P

The only thing I won't read is two guys doing it. Sorry, but just...NO.
ex_senza6
Nov. 6th, 2004 03:27 pm (UTC)
Ah yes, the Mousse rule.

"Anything! Tentacle rape, bestiality, death, blood, bondage, orc-sex, goats, incest, orgies, the depths of foul and tainted depravity and perversion... but not slash." XD
mousse9
Nov. 6th, 2004 10:33 pm (UTC)
Hey, one must draw the line SOMEwhere. ^___^;;

And I don't particularly like snuff fics (where one of the chara's die, usually the girl). Unless it's tentacle rape. Then it's OK. @_@

Others? Hm, peeing and pooping, torture, blood, and I'm not too much into the leather and hardcore S&M stuff...
eclective
Nov. 8th, 2004 09:36 am (UTC)
XD!!!

Yes... no pee, no poop (I can concur with that, that stuff ickifies me), but as much cream cheese as is orcishly possible for Mousse. :33333

Oh, and your icon makes me squee a squeeing squee. XD
eclective
Nov. 8th, 2004 09:37 am (UTC)
...so if it had been a male animal and a boy you'd have run for the hills? XD XD
mousse9
Nov. 8th, 2004 03:04 pm (UTC)
Well, not exactly for the HILLS. They would've caught me there. No, more in the direction of the city. ^^;;
kawakiisakazuki
Nov. 8th, 2004 06:30 am (UTC)
You're scaring me... which part of being dragged naked from your home in the middle of the night implies consent? o.o

There's no turn-on quite like having a good rousing fight, so that part was clever. But AFAIK it is rare among animals for pack dominance rituals to end with fatalities... (fantasy? what's that?)

I forgot to add; good job on the fight scene! Samedi's final move was perhaps a little too hazy, but I have to admit that I read over this part fast to get to the naughty stuff ^^;
eclective
Nov. 8th, 2004 09:35 am (UTC)
You're scaring me... which part of being dragged naked from your home in the middle of the night implies consent? o.o

The implication was that she wasn't actually dragged, she came willingly.

And hey, if it was by someone I thought was hot, I wouldn't object. :3

I did think that typically a pack dominance ritual wouldn't end in a fatality - it was more that I was trying to picture him as just so pissed off that he struck a killing blow without even thinking, and then kind of gave in to the bloodlust.

You liked the fight scene? It was kinda rushed; hopefully you'll like the one I've written so far for Sanguis Corpus, then. Not sure how well I translated the axe stuff into actual descrip, if at all - the videos helped a lot, I'm not that good at translating instructional description to prose description, as it happens, but I got them after ch.3 - but I think the flow went better than that. Pack Dominance was written after Sanguis Corpus 3, though, so I think it helped.

And thanks for reading! I was worried, like, everyone would be freaked out by this. @_@
kawakiisakazuki
Nov. 8th, 2004 11:50 am (UTC)
I was a little freaked that you wrote it, yes ^^; You were not kidding about horny teenage male fantasies. About the consent, well, I know it's fantasy, but the girl didn't seek out the pack by herself, and didn't get to choose who did the honours, so how willing she was is a bit open for interpretation...

I think you did a fair job with the fight scene to establish setting and the motivations and feelings of the characters, there was some detail but you didn't get carried away. It could be more polished but I think it was better than what one would normally expect in this kind of story ;)

Do I take it that you received the disc?
eclective
Nov. 8th, 2004 12:16 pm (UTC)
I was a little freaked that you wrote it, yes ^^;

That's because you don't know me very well. :3 I AM the gay pizza delivery cat in a female human's body that your mother warned you about, as was once someone's sig on a forum I frequent.

And yes, I got the disc. Did you get email?
kawakiisakazuki
Nov. 8th, 2004 12:52 pm (UTC)
Yes, I hadn't checked the mail yet.

I was a little surprised that you wrote a HET story. I would have been freaked out if you had written this from the girl's pov, though.

I can't remember my mother ever mentioning gay pizza cats...
eclective
Nov. 8th, 2004 01:28 pm (UTC)
Heh, as I suspected, everyone goes, "eh, bestiality, like whatever", but is freaked out that I wrote het. XD XD I've found it a lot easier to identify with male roles of late, I believe.

Why would it be worse from the girl's perspective?
mousse9
Nov. 8th, 2004 03:07 pm (UTC)
"Ohh, he killed him. That's SOOO exciting, all the blood! I'm horny now. Let's shag."

......Nevermind.
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eclective
Nov. 8th, 2004 04:44 pm (UTC)
::nods:: I suppose I can get your point. I mean, it's all relative; plenty of girls out there who'd love imagining being on the receiving end. I don't find it more squicky, just less appealing personally.

And what do you meeeeean? If it was that incident with the motorcycle and sidecar, my paw slipped..... :x
kawakiisakazuki
Nov. 8th, 2004 04:50 pm (UTC)
Well, leopardy felines molesting underage girls is not at all unexpected from you. >:)

Why would it be worse from the girl's perspective?

Hm, I suppose I would be puzzled why you would *want* to write from the girl's perspective, when it would probably make you uncomfortable to even imagine being in her position. I would not be comfortable getting too much in the female character's mind in this case.
kawakiisakazuki
Nov. 8th, 2004 04:52 pm (UTC)
Oops, I had messed up the tags and didn't see the reply. Why can't we edit comments? :(
eclective
Nov. 8th, 2004 04:57 pm (UTC)
I knowwww... I suppose it's because it sends email.
eclective
Nov. 8th, 2004 12:23 pm (UTC)
And now I have that biker song "Leader of the Pack" in my head. ¬_¬
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